I liked it, it was really interesting putting the date in, that's not something you see all that often. It is a sad story, but a good poem has come out of it so well done.
Oh, yeah, about the title, I found it more intreguing that it was untitled, so unless you find a title that you personal think fits, it's cool the way it is.
*VioletRaven*

Thanx violet :')