Comments : Ode to the Tudors

  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Wow awsome write, I love the last 2 lines! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Wow this whole poem is so sad but is great!
    The flow was perfect and you told a story in it and I really enjoyed how you named out each member and it really was a window to your soul..
    Its definatly a 5/5..
    The ending was great! Really finished it off..
    Your a great writer well done!

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    First, your family is huge! =) This is really great, you had me going to the very end. Emotions spread through every lines and you had the flow right there. It's easy to read and understand. The way you link each member to the next, the transition is really smooth. Great work there and this is your first poem?! =D

  • 18 years ago

    by Nikki

    Wow! I really like how you worte this. it was a brief description of your whole family and i love it! seems like mine but it is only me and my parents! ha! but i couldnt imagine having such chaos and insanity! I really liked it though!

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    That sounded to me like it was one person who was all these things. thats probably not what u wanted but thats what i got out of it. it was so sad but yet a laughed at the end. i dotn know why. good poem though.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This is really good. It's very descriptive and the flow was good. This is my favorite poem that you've written. It's really cute & I like it alot. I look forward to reading more poems from you. Great job! Keep up the good work! 5/5***