This is so beauiful. You are so talented. I really like this a lot. GOOD JOB.

Sweet sweet sweeeeeeeet poem hunny. Awwwwwww ur poems are adorable just like u!!! Keep writing, keep posting!!!! U rock!!!! Smooch..muah muah xxxxxxxxx hehehe.. take care angel xxxxxxx

Amazing job and she's a lucky girl to have a best friend like you i hope she read it and really knows how much you mean to her. Amazing job once again. very talented i would have to say. i love reading your poems. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Very good... touching even.

"Satin rings"?
I didn't quite get that. Either you had run out of rhymes or it's something personal.
Anyway, there's that i's thing again, but the rest is very touching, and it has an air of heart-felt-ness.

Good Writing!
beth

I thought this was really touching. I'll give you the suggestions first. The second stanza sounds a little "odd" if you don't mind me saying. "Though I'm not here, I'm always there" seems to contradict itself...maybe reword this?
Also I don't think there's any need to say "don't cry" twice, maybe you could alter the second one.
I'm sure Ellie will love this poem, I gave my friends a poem too when I left school so I know it helps to show how you feel. The final stanza was amazing, it gave me shivers. For the improvements, keep that stanza style in mind and you're on to a winner. Well done, take care.

Well first of all thanks for all the comments!!! and u know what, your very talented good job!! 5/5

This is a terrific poem.
5/5 =]
Your very talented!!

Great poem i bet it must make ur friend feel so special to know she has a friend like u
xo
allana