Wow this was intense and extremely sad....great job writing it...i hope you dont know the person who had this happened to them....that just makes me sick....great job writing it though...5/5 keep it up luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Holy crap dats a gd poem?? if its true den i relli feel sorry 4 d peson!!

Oh my gosh. I am so sorry for who it happened to, rather it was really you or someone else. It was a great poem though.

This poem brought tears to my eyes,
it was extremely sad but well written!!
i hope that this didn't happen to a friend of yours or some-one you know!!
well done it was excellent, :)

Wow this is a great poem it really scared me keep up the good work, you could really tell all the emotions that this girl went through and you can't help but want to be there to help her but you can't