Man...that's awesome...oh well...hope the war will end soon...pray to god...god bless u...my dear child...lol...

Thanks for comenting on her love pome it means alot to us this is nolan her ex she was my first and only girl frien i still want to e with her really ad and we really cant tell shes 18 her parients and suff she rote that awile ago when we were still dating and even tho i was at work yesterday i knew she wasnt haveing a good day i still feal when she happy and sad even tho we havent talked in a few mounths we till right poems back and forth im not the one thats dateing some one els like i said she all i can think 0f is her wel rigt back it u want lexcondevill

Thank you Jessica for the comment on my poem "If I could" I appreciate your honest opinion. However, keep in mind that this poem was just wrote in a joking matter. Trust me, when you are in a 3 year relationship like I have been, and he does you dirty...you feel like doing a heck of a lot more than tying his shoelaces together!
Again...thanks for your comment. I appreciate it. And good luck on your writing. You are a talented young writer :)

Holly

Hahah thats wicked jessica good work :D!