It was pretty good. I don't know... it didn't really flow really well, but you did a good job with emotion. i give you 3/5 :)
Luv,
waiting4prince~charming

I DIDNT REALLY WANT IT TO FLOW THAT MUCH BUT THANKS

Well i loved it....it kinda scares me though bc the guy i care about is leaving this summer...we're not together but i still cannot bear the thought of seeing him leave...i wanna be with him so bad...neways nice poem