That was amazing.
best thing ive read.
please write more.
do it.

I really like it, i love hte part ''my bloodshot eyes tell of all
the nights Ive cried because of
you.'' not quite sure why but it speaks to me...anyway good job!-xxx-

Hey.. thanks for the comments on my poem.. anyways.. i really liked this poem.. i enjoyed reading it.. i especially liked the part that said:
please dont try help me out
you have not a glimpse of how I feel
you cant mend my shattered heart
and you cant make my wrists heal
... i think you have a talent for this, keep it up... 1