Comments : It's not the best...

  • 14 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    That I must agree...and hmm...nothing much to say about this...about the comment u left me...

    I certainly won'y encourage my friend by forgiving's just that sometimes...u must put urself in their shoe...people make mistake...maybe it's just one of their mistake for mixing with the wrong crowd...but I assure u...if they are the wrong crowd themself...I don't think I'll be friend with them...that poem isn't about me or my friends like I said...the reason I wrote it is because sometimes...people make mistake...just like a mom who abandon her child..and then she realize and wants her back...but the child hates her...maybe she doesn't dserves a forgiveness...yet sometimes...they do deserves it...

  • 14 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hi!! That was a great inspirational poem for all the heart brokens here. Hope you didnt had to go thro this but even if u did...i m sure u came right out of it and hv been stronger than before.

    Well, i m really thankful to u for all ur comments and concerns regarding me. As long as u see my new poems being submitted..u be rest assured that i m alive.. :o)) Nitin

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  • 14 years ago

    by Bethan

    Gr8 poem.. i really really liked it,beautiful sentiments expressed oh so poetically. xx

  • 14 years ago

    by Adriana

    You are right about its not the beginning when love comes into your life...I like how this poem flows..