Comments : YOU

  • 17 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    That is REALLY sad.
    Its a good poem tho but could work on the flow.
    Keep writing its a great way to let out your feelings! well done x)

  • 17 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    Hey Brandon, I liked your poem just make like wat lisa said make it flow and have some kind of rythem. srr I'm not teacher I know just trying help, but otherwise I liked it alot--Rachel--

  • 17 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow hun i read ur profile and that's truly tragic, i'm so sorry for your loss.
    This is a sad poem hun..as intended..'
    i hope you're ok.
    sorry i couldn't give the wise words as u did on mine...
    thanks a lot for the comment xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Kirsty

    This is AWESOME!!!
    I love it every word flows straight through the next...so much passion and heart ache...WOW great write brandon Well done :D:D
    5/5
    Check out some of my new stuff too
    Take care ~Keep it up~
    Love kirsty xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Good one..i rly enjoyed it keep it up hun. LISSA

  • 17 years ago

    by JLT

    Wow, this is amazing! It's so sad. I know it's hard to lose someone.. Especially the way you lost him... I'm here if you ever need to talk to me, though.. And you're an amazing writer. Keep up the wonderful work. *hugs*

    ~Jessica