Very Beautiful! Writing like that takes true talent! 5/5!

Wow awesome poem hun..
great work, the vocab u used was really strong and completely set the scence for this..
take care xoxo

Wow Nikki this is great! The power and emotion put into it rocked!!!!
Your choice of words really set the atmosphere and wow I really loved readoing it! well done hun its really good!! x)

Absolutely a masterpiece. Nikki, I think I've told you before how talented and beautiful you write.....this was truly breathtaking.....You are blessed with talent.....loved it....The flow, the wording, everything about it just perfect.....

Love Ann

Great poem... I gave it a 5/5!

Wow that is amazing!!!! really bootiful! :D xxxx

Whoa! this is so sad. sob, I was like bout to cry, you have a talent. keep writing.

5/5 David

A very sad poem, i enjoyed it, i always believed that sad poems were the best and you reminded me that.

Best Wishes
Wallace

You are an EXCELLENT writter! this just adds to your collection! :) great job!

Butterfly Kisses
Driven In Decay
Swallowed Up In Sorrow
Sweetly Blown Away

those are the best words i've ever seen written in one verse of a poem. so wonderfully written.