I need to get better

Ok

We all get better but you dont NEED to get better that was one of your best pieces of work
but still i live

Hehehe, nice one Em.
Josh, i thought that had extroardinary potential but there was a little too much repetition. Mayeb if you only used "but still i live" once every stanza.... i dunno. Poetry is meant to mean something to u, so as longa s that's right, its' all good.
Rock on!
-Suzie