I think it is really great, and I'm sure the melody is also fantastic. One day you should release this, I would buy it, cause it is not manufactured like so much music nowadays. Full of emotion, well done.
*VioletRaven*

Actually, there is nothing to say except it was breath-taking. I would really love to hear it to music. It is hard to pull off song lyrics...but you did. And very well at that!