I love the metaphor in this. the whole uephamism of lemodand and everything. the message was good too. the flow was very fast paced in the beginning then it seemed to get serious so it calmed down. i really liked that.

WOW...I'm in love with this poem. The whole message was simple and quaint but you wrote it so entrancingly...I gave it a 5.....thanks for the comment....I always return the favor =)

That was amazing. iloved every word great write.
Emma 5/5

Turning a fmous quote into a poem is a hard thing to do without ruining the quote. But you pulled it off nicely. Great work.

Peace. [Sole]

Entrancing- loved it! goog job x