Comments : Closing My Eyes

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    That was beautiful writing. it actually felt like u were standing there saying this to him and then falling into his arms. great emotion in every word.

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    'Throught my years.'
    Is it 'through' ?

    Hey I really enjoy this, it's sweet and it's cute. It's kind of lyrical too. The words are easy and pleasant, and it expresses what is intended.
    'Or let me crash to the ground.' I feel that this line kind of disturb the flow a little, but maybe it's just me, if that is so, ignore me. Nonetheless, I really enjoyed this. =D