Comments : My love

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty

    I'll always love you too
    whether your far away or standing in front of me I'll always be yours

    "You're the closet to heaven that i've ever been"

    And I'll love you, be there and protect till i die
    I promise
    I'll miss you like anything
    I love you my lil sunshine
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Hey, beautiful. The flow could probably be bettered just a little bit...
    It had good rhyme, though.

    -beth

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammi

    Very good I too have a special girl who this fits in my ;life who I will always love no matter what love this keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by bex

    Wish i could of helped you more when you told me last night

    i'll always be here to talk if you need me

  • 18 years ago

    by Falling Up

    I really enjoyed this poem, the flow it had, and all the emotional attachment...its like u didnt even have to think about what u were going to say, it just flowed out with such passion.. i hope that whoever is gone out of your life that u love, you never forget, but at the same time, u move on because sitting around, waiting for somthing that might not even happen, will hurt more... and while your sitting around waiting, better thngs might be passing you by, even tho u think it could never happen.. hope it all works out

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    That was soooooo sweet!! u write the best love poems ever!!! good job