That's sweet, and I can semi-relate from seeing my mom's pain when her grandma died. You did a great job incorporating dialogue, it gives it a sentimental feel. I hope she gets better soon, and I hope you're alright.

Take Care,
Renee

Beautiful poem! but i'm so sorry that this happened, i hope she's ok and gets better soon. best of wishes!

alwayz,
*ophelia*

Was she okay?? i hope so....its so hard to lose someone so close to you that you love so much. i rlly rlly like ur poems....they r so..TOUCHING. anyways....im adding u to my favorites..uve got talent (unlike me)
--Dory