Great poem. the structure is very effective and the rhyming subbtle so doesn't interupt the flow nor distract from the meaning.

An excellent poem, very fluid and nice use of vocabulary. Great poem

Again gr8 use of description....this shows sadness, and giving up hope...all mixed 2gether into a perfect blend which is this poem....gr8 work! 5/5!
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Awesome... deserves nothing short of 5/5

Wow , awsome poem, keep it up your a talented writer, 5/5 thx for taking the time to read mine

~natalie~