Comments : Hurting Me

  • 18 years ago

    by mkml

    Very deep and very good. Thanks for the comment on mine too.

    --Chelseyy

  • 18 years ago

    by Jin

    Wow. all your poems are awesome. I need to read them all, and I will sometimes this week.. I love them I will add you to my favorites! I love your style. =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jin

    Wow. all your poems are awesome. I need to read them all, and I will sometimes this week.. I love them I will add you to my favorites! I love your style. =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Bitten by frost

    Awsome poem, i think all of us must have someone else lurking inside them, but if yours escaping leads you to writing that then i hope she never stops. 5/5 love it

  • 18 years ago

    by AngelFromHell12

    I think this is my favorite poem of yours for now. This poem seems like it has so much pain behind it, and it seems like pain was your inspiration for it all. I really really enjoyed this poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Ohhh this was beautiful.
    The imagery used created vivid pictures, flow was flawless throughout and the word choice and rhyme scheme were enjoyable.
    The opening stanza really pulled me in, and from there on it kept getting better and better.
    I thought the ending was so elegant and intense, a perfect way to wrap up.