This poem is very good. i've asked myself many of these questions in the past.

the last line though doesn't seem to fit...maybe you wanted it to stand out, not really sure.

all in all great poem .

I thought this peom was really good, I could completely relate to it and i really touched me. Well done!

I thought this peom was really good, I could completely relate to it and i really touched me. Well done!

Omg..i could relate to this 110%...
wow..awesome poem but to answer your questions..god yeh ppl would miss u and ppl care..
i hope you're ok..talk to me weneva u want xoxoxo