Hi again!!!!!!
well frankly speaking yaar i m not able to understand wat its all abt. but really wanna know abt this. once i can know the meaning then i will positively comment HONESTLY!!!!!!
u know wat wen i read ur poem-my bday song i thought i got a joyful poem but again........

I loved it!! awesoem idea...
take care of urself..the cloud will fade away..
xoxox

Hi
as now i hav com to know the depth of the poem , i think i can rate it now. i give it a 4. well this poem really seems very imaginative. keep it up!
bharti

I've read it a couple of times, before I figured out how I wanted to respond, comment if you will.

I like the poem, honestly you are a good writer.
I like the idea, and your way of writing. I guess, what I'm saying is: keep writing, I enjoy reading!

This poem is really deep and liek all of ur others an awesome and an original idea..i love it keep up 5/5
xox

I have read and written thousands of these books with the thousand deaths that I've died. And flipping through those pages I've seen you somewhere in my own reflection.

A masterpiece indeed.

Love
Michelle

Nitin
Excellent job on this write. Loved the imagery and word choices.

this book is no fiction
every pain is reality
this book reminds me of my life
this book reminds me of misery
this book is about betrayel
this book is about me

Fantasy? Are you sure ?
Love Cindy