OmFg im in the SAMMEEE thing right now..i can totally relate to ur poem right now..tht is soooo pretty and i just love it..it made me cry cuz im in the same thing..the guy i love chose a gurl over me who acts like she dont giv a dam about him wen its clear id do nething 4 him..if u have yahoo add me sugarsweet4u72

Man what is with us grls are we all going through the same thing.well my boyfriend cheated on me and then broke up with me but the messed up thing bout it is that she was my best friend (dat bi+ch)and she alwayz messes around behind his back!even though i my love him, they both can go to..... i should shut up now/well add my to ur yahoo if you have it heartbreaker12691(its old thats why it sounds gay)

Aww i like this poem i have felt like that before and don't worry u will find someone who loves you and will never choose anyone over you trust me
it happens it happend to me.
lol and the thing was it is the same guy lol but that is a long story i hope you get everything worked out.

~Kayla~

Oh my freaking gosh..... your an amazing poet. keep in touch.. your now added to my favorites. *5/5*

Cute...very unique in style...well...but if he chooses her over you...it's his choice...even if you love him more...both of you might not meant tobe together....sorry...that's just what I think...

I liked this poem, because it really didn't seem likea poem, just a letter to someone that you love

That relates to sooo many teens it freaky :)

Very good job, A poem many people can relate too. I felt a lot of emotion. 5/5, keep writing.

Wow, this is amazing! First of all because I was (or am, I don't know yet) in the same situation, except that I haven't thought of dying or cutting!
And secondly because it's so imaginative,the writing style is great!
Thanks for commenting on my poems! It really means a lot to me!!!

Great job. it's cute. LOL

No no no no. it wasn't bad at all.
i loved it. I'm goign through this too. My best friend likes my ex...but secretly i still love him. and i feel like no one in this world will ever care about him the way i cared about him. and guess what?? YOUR ON MY FAVORITES LIST TOOOO. =]]]
wonderful job.

teenage tragedy|♥|

Babe i love you so much~hugs u tight~ love you lots-britt

Hey i liek your peom your good it realates in alot of ways to me, but not over who i losted eho over my mom lost becasue of me