Cute little poem, Vanessa. The rhythm works so well that it could easily be put to music. The three sets of four stanzas flow beautifully. All I can suggest is that you put a space between them to make the structure more obvious. If you have any more poems on the site, I'll definitely check them out. 4/5

Wow! really nicely done!!! very nice structure and very well written keep it up!! ~roxy~