Comments : Problem

  • 15 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This is really goood.

    but you might want to go thouhg and correct the words that have gone a bit odd. (ie "canâ??t")

  • 15 years ago

    by Solace

    I love this poem. It has a lot of depth and emotion behind it.. take care xx:

    blaine *> : PainOfOne