Comments : If You Ever

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This is a great poem, keep writing. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by swill

    Splendid job
    5/5
    check mine out too
    i cudnt understand the mssg in the end....pls explain it

  • 18 years ago

    by Matters

    Really, truly, amazing. All I can say is wow. No doubt surreal--possibly channeled? Keep up the amazing writing.

    Matt

  • 18 years ago

    by manic moments

    WOW

    Luv Niquee
    xoxoxoxox