Oh my mona...thats beautiful
The ending shows that you have put everything you have into this poem
I like the fact that I understand exactly how you feel when I read a poem of yours
Well done
Take care
love kirsty xxxx

This poem also shows a lot of emotion..i admire your poems already.
"Doc, did you just say I'm depressed?
You're so clever, I'm impressed!
Oh excuse me, I am too rude?!
Anything else you can conclude?"
My favourite paragraph! well done babe
Rosie xXx

Beautiful...
The sense of saracasm really works
keep it up
xxx

Omg hun this poem is sooo good. its soo beautifully written! lol it also made me laugh at some parts.

Doc, did you just say I'm depressed?
You're so clever, I'm impressed!
Oh excuse me, I am too rude?!
Anything else you can conclude?

that part is so great! chin up sweetie. your such an amazing writer. just try to get thru these tough times and things will get better. well thats what others tell me...so they havta right? lol. ok well great poem 5/5 lyl~lex

Well hadent commented on this one, i love the sarcastic tone to it, love it!-xxx-