Comments : My mask

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Excellent poem yet again! but very sad, i can really relate to this.5/5. take care,
    emma xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by OuR oWn BrAt PaCk

    I love the poem beccy i can realli relate

    love
    xoxomeganxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Natasha

    It is indeed sad, but somehow sadness can be beautifull when put out right.
    I think this is a good poem, not your best, but good and I suggest you keep on writing loads!

    take care of yours..,
    natasha

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Omg this one is really good and sad :(

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Awesome poem hun..god it's so true.
    Take care..
    i'd love it if u could check out some of mine?!
    thanks xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky Karen

    I realy like your poem, iv read a few of them, your realy a great poet. please keep writting. Becky x

  • Omg very very good i can relate to it you are a really good poem writer keep up the good work good luck with everything

  • 18 years ago

    by Shadows Collide

    Everybody has a different way of expressing dark truths about their true nature. This poem certainly sums this up with your use of "the mask". Anyone with any emotional difficulty can relate to falsifying emotions when communicating with other people. It's a daily struggle that I'm told we conquer.

  • 18 years ago

    by yaRis

    Hey Becky HOLA! lol well gurl 1st thanx for commenting on my poem She is me... 2nd that's funny what u said about u liking puerto ricans lol.. i mean is okay being puerto rican no biggie cuz then again we are american so we ain't da different (dat's da only part i don't like we aint 2 different but oh well we still have a lil differences lol specially XMAS lol and da way our homw land looks) n e ways i was reading your poem and i liked it alot cuz well u already read my poems she is me and well is sad true but sad and is funny dat u wrote about a mask because alot of time in my real life i have to pretend and tell everyone im okay when im really not so i guess i am too wearing a mask ....oh well stay sweet gurla CUIDATE (aka: take care) Adios Chula (aka;bye sweety) =) lol

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow, i love it. i can relate. excellent job. 5/5
    **lisa**

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    This Is So True! It's as though you have seen into my own experiences! I wish that none of us had to hide behind the mask and yet it is all that keeps us safe.
    I hope that one day you will find someone to whom you will not need to show the mask. Be yourself through writing, it is the best you can do. I love all your poems.
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Wow. i loved it. i find myself feeling like that. it was beauitful. keep up the great work.
    Emma 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Carrie

    Great poem... I loved it... I can relate to it... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Erica

    This poem is truly touching, i can relate to it alot, thank you for it. Great poem 5l5