It was kinda hard to follow...but who am I to talk, anyway, it was a superb poem. I would advise you to ignore anyone who rates you less than a five!

This is a great poem....i kind of agree with chad though about it been difficult to follow, had to read it twice *laugh*

Thats nice very cool, i am really touched, that it opended my eyes to what we do and accept it as normal. But that is another poem. Keep it up.

I have read your stuff before. You haven't comment back. People probably don't read your poetry anymore because of the broken promise 'I will return the favor' Just make sure you pull through for them, and they will keep coming back. As for me, I read poetry for enjoyment, not for ratings or comments.

I love the ending parts like the last 3 sections nice job keep up the good work wish it wasnt so sad tho