Well done dear!
as u write in ur 5th stanza that no 1 will remember u after ur death i agree. thats y we say live 4 urself 2. enjoy ur life yaar. dont b so depressed always.
cheer up and make others smile 2 bcoz people rem those who make them smile. thats all i hav 2 say.
still waiting 4 a cheerful poem from ur side!!!!!!!!!!
luv, bharti

Well done Nitin! It's a good one! Emotional and sensitive... Liked it!

Great poem luv your work

Awesome poem nitin!!
you're simply amazing...
dont ever stop writing..and im always here for u, and that extra help ok?!?!
take care xoxoxo

Wow.... i don't really know what to say--- it's so touchy... yet so true.. I loved the way you write-- truly wonderful..

Love,
Ipsita

I would just like to say: Damn! your good =)
I love this poem, very captivating.. which is the idea of course.

Wow i think this is 1 of my faves from u its amazing! keep up the good work definet 5/5
xox

Who on earth wants me? Well, the one who would put the broken pieces of your heart together and show you how to smile again. Got any clue who it is? lol....

Life is just like a mirror, you look at it with a smile and you'll see its smiling back at you.

Love
Michelle

Nitin
I am so glad you now know what a good man you are. How much you matter :) You are my rock. I could not make it without you. Who would want me? Me dost....you are the best! Always remember that. Even when I am no longer on earth....I will be with you:)
Excellent job on your writing...I can see so much inprovement with each poem I read.
Take Care Love You Cindy