Hi its so good i give it a 5++

WOW!!! i love that poem!!!! i think it is sooo true!!! keep up the good work!!
love Nessy

I like this alot you express your thoughts so well

Brillient really cool
xaaronx

This poem has a lot of emotions on how u feel

Hey gurl its me luves,5/5/i luved it

luves,
luves4eva

A few spelling errors, but the rhyming was amazing

you may want to try putting lines inbetween each line, just so its easier on the eye

It was a very sad poem.. but i gave it 5/5 nice work keep it up.

Great wrk its a good poem

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice poem I like it :) really good :)
5/5

Good job nice 10/10

Woops... i sed forever ad ment it waaaay too many times hehe... but i ment it.