I feel the same so much im cryin on the spot, bout the part wer he has his arms round her instead. feel the same rite now.

It's a good poem! I understand your feelings and what you are going through. I appreciate the way you described it.

I have once loved someone and they broke my heart. You captured the feeling of it perfectly. You have a talent. This poem got to me. I admit I am crying. Keep putting out your amazing poetry.