OMG!!!
what a great poem. tessy bear u ROCK
EmmA says hi tessy bear! ! ! (emma is soo cute lol)
okies tessy well done luv ya heaps
xoxoxoxoxox
~*MaRy*~( and EmmA) luv u tessy bear

Very good, im not sure, at the end did the person die? I think so... but i just wasn't really sure. anyways 5/5

I really liked this poem. Both in writing and meaning.

Deeeeeeeeeeeeeep

Babe that was hot
keep it up!