Awwwwwww that sad but awsome 10/10 lol your really good you knoe

Its awsome

Thats wonderful, its really rich and creates great images and is just a wonderful poem. Great job.

I like the repetition at the end, just the line 'sobbing heart cry love' do you mean crys.......lol sorry its a great read, the flow is brilliant, lovely word craft. The last line is just....brilliant.

Hey. =']
Great Job. =']

I Liked It. =']
xxx.