Um... the ryhmes are kinda forced but its pretty good.

Hey, this was really sad and touching.
the rhymes were good. I'm happy that
you're not angry anymore.
much love,
marjan

Really good agressive poem it seems pretty emotional but cool...and I like your name.

I like this poem, very emotional.

one suggestion though is that the word "it" semed slightly overused near the begining.