Its gr8 amie i see ur emotion n i can sum how relate thanks 4 sharing it

Its nice

Hey its good i like it

Hey i completely no what u mean about forcing the smile at day and crying at night i can really relate to that...
take care
xox
ruby

I know that others have said it already, but it's really good, and....i know exactly how that feels- especially crying at night....that's become the norm, ya know? very well written, hon... keep going.....

Yippieness. its gud amz. hugz n kisses

Wow quite deep

It may be only a few lines but it's deep.You did an awesome job with it keep writting your good at it.

It was breathtaking
thank god it was short or i'd die of suffocation
really had to hold my breath thruout
keep up the good work
dhaval

I like this sort of short poem. Its really good. I wish i could write short poems, but I keep going on and on lol

I can relate to that. Great poem you express yourself well keep up the good work look forword to more

This is an awesome poem and like starlight i can deeply relate you are a great poet keep it up!