Comments : Simply Red

  • 18 years ago

    by bex

    Again this one creates a story in my head

    it's quite dramatic and depictive

    i have no idea what dilapidated means =D

    great world hun x

  • 18 years ago

    by bex

    I ment work..world yeh wah?!

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily parsons

    Chilling subject to write about
    A great poem though...
    Well done
    xx