Comments : Stop and look

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Wow that was differemt but so cool! xoLISSAxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    I loved this part:
    Wind, snow, rain, sleet.
    Just stop to take a seat.
    I think shorter lines make the poem
    better. you did a really good job on
    this one. I liked your choice of words.
    take care,
    marjan