Comments : I'm Lost In A Day

  • 18 years ago

    by oldthings

    I relate so much to this poem

    Tomorrow brings confusion
    But yesterday brought pain
    So where am I to go
    When this happens all again

    and i esspecialy like this line. the whole thing had such good flow to it and a steady rhym scheme. i love it, thanks for sharing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Casey

    Maybe because it's late and I just had a butt-load of ice cream, but it was really hard for me to follow your poem to understand what was going on. You're not telling a story you're telling how you feel... SO I think it's really origional, I like the last stanza. 5/5