That was a great poem. powerful emotions in every stanza.i especially think the closing stanza was great, particularly hard hitting.

Brad

P.S. thanks for reading 'When'. i don't know why its so poorly rated, but as i say...its one of my favorites...if not my favorite. i'm grad you enjoyed it. if you want to try another 'bitter twisted fool' is a good one...in my opinion

I dont know what to say other then that was REALLY good.
and that im sorry for everything you're going through.
you're not alone. trust me!

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