You really love your mum, don't you?
it's great! both this poem and the fact that you care so much.
I like the meaning and the captivation possibility in this poem... well done,
XxXNatashAXxX

How sweet, you managed to capture true emotion in the poem beautifully and the flow was awesome, all the lines ran perfectly together and I just loved it, I can't find nothing negative to say about it, except you spelled alright "allright" but thats a simple spelling error and it didn't effect the poem at all, I can't spell that good myself, so Its fine, but great job, 5/5

Beautiful!!
i loved!
hugs

Thanx 4 the sp i changed it xoxox

Cool man

Thats a really sweet way to thank your mum nice rhyming mate too
xox rc kisses

Very touchin

Wow, that was beautiful. yeah, beautiful. one of your best poems
I think.
take care,
marjan

Wow!!! v. good poem. your quite the poet.
its great u have such a nice relstionship with your mum, i wish i had such a great relationship with my mum but i dont lol.

check out some of my poems if you get the chance! thanz love jess XxXxX