* clapping in my seat! * I really, really love this poem.
I have honestly never read anything so short, and powerful before...
*Deep boW*

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LOL that was cute baby!!!!
Love ur girl Sarah

Wow! this was so powerful.. very good for only 17 syllables! i loved it, it was so pretty and the imagery was great! thank youu for the comment! excellent write! 5/5

Very relaxing with nice detailed imagery.

I love the first line. Just reading it is so refreshing in itself.