Wow you have really long poems awesome!!!!!
great job

Its odd but it kept me reading unlike other poems some people write that i cant even continue to read. i rlly felt the sadness. u hav a grrt dark mind. i loved it!!
love lots,
sore

5\5

Hmm wow..This is a long. It's kind of weird though.Weird is good right? Anyways, I can't say I agree with the flow, it's kind of wacky, and the format is, none, but the content of this poem was good. Keep up the good work.

Wow i like this poem.. good job...5/5

Great one well written very sad

Wow amazing!!You have true talent.Great poem.5/5