Wow Bharti,you seem to be a wonderful poet in hindi...Just beautiful and heart touching words...a small desire is what gives us the hope and a small hope is what gives us a dream...Beautiful poem...take care and keep writing...

Do i really know u??
every poem of urs is so different..sometimes so beautifully u describe the importance of happiness and then u come with such a bitter fact embossed with amazing words...wow!! that was right through heart i tell u...

all the very best dear!

how abt a horror poem from u...next??? wont u listen to ur reader's request yaar??? hahaha kidding!!

Hello bharti !
well im really sorry i didn have chance to read ur poems before , now that im reading im really moved .
especially this one ......
bahut pyaari lines likhi hai tumne , dard bhi aur uska ehsaas bhi !!!

Chavii.

Hi
wat a lovely poem.
i agree wit chavii ke ye kavita to dard bhi dedi hai aur uska ehsaas bhi!!!
i love ur poems etni achi hindi likti ho aap. keep writing bharti coz u hav talent for it.

take care
sonam