Hmm this one was very deep i liked it keep up the good work xaaronx

Very deep poem. i like it a lot

Thats heaps nice well thought
alota feeling

Vooo!! speechless... all i can say is that i gave 5/5...i dont hv words to appreciate...amazing dear..all the best

It's true if we carry on like this we will force children to hate the only place they have ever known