I really liked this. There were two lines at the beginning with internal rhyming, but I was disappointed when I found no more. If you start with some internal rhyming, you should finish it out that way. I really love it, and it gives readers a break from the bland rhyming of each line in every poem they read on here.

The message was really great. I think it really describes how all of us can feel at one point or another, (or at least I know I have felt this way).

My honest critique: 4/5