Comments : Ever Wished

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Sweet poem. I liked the final lines they did well to sum up the poem.
    Suggestion - maybe making this poem a little longer could give you more ideas to think about. Thanks for sharing.

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Yeah.

  • 18 years ago

    by goldie

    Cool.