Comments : False life

  • 18 years ago

    by A Heart Losing Hope

    =( i like this one, but very sad

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Really good. Thanks for sharing. Thanks for the compliments as well. I enjoyed reading your poetry. :o)

    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Cynthia--Nasr

    I think i live a false life/.. i keep wearing a fake smile..nice job

  • I loved this poem. familiar story... sad and true. nice write.

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    Hmm... I concur, can relate a lot. Great poem, simple but very good work. Also thanks for commenting on my poem, I'll be sure to check your stuff out in the future.

  • 18 years ago

    by LOVE.ME.HATE.ME

    Loved it!! Keep on writing! And dont live a false life. Tell everyone to fuk off. Dont let them turn you into a lie.

    Keep on living,
    -Jin

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Brilliant poem, you have so much emotion put into all of your poems.

  • 18 years ago

    by Vanessa Lea

    Those four little words can save a person a lot of grief, and I've found if you say them enough - you can start to believe them.

  • Really simple yet so affective. Saying those words makes everything easier when you think to yourself that maybe you will be ok. I love it good work
    Take Care Emma xxx