Comments : My Illusion

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily

    Where there's a cut upon my skin
    The blood begins to seep
    A sharp edge engraves a path
    I watch it slice so deep

    An excellent stanza. Your description in this poem was simply Amazing, and I have no Idea how it could get a 4.9 instead of a 5.0. Excellent J

  • 18 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    Loved it .........and quite unique

    Keep up the good work

    ~~Julie~~