Two words
Brutally
Honest.

I wouldn't change a thing about it, because its the truth.

Good Writing
beth

We get angry, saddened, we wonder why it has to be this way. We know that something is wrong yet we have know idea what to do about it. One person alone is not enough. We get together and try to figure it out and it is never enough to heal the pain. And in the end it is the most innocent among us that suffer the most.
Keep on dreaming, Mona, as will I.
Peace and Love.

So true well done i liked it cause it shows life

Its good

Wonderful dear.... so damn unique... we desperately need more poems like this... love ur work...take care

Good job! u said right that we really need to think abt these children. its nice to read such a topic . nice poem. take care
bharti

This was word just right. It's so truthful. Wonderful job, keep it up!

Oh my so powerful. and i hope this opens up a few peoples eyes to what is really goin on in our 'perfect' world