Comments : The children in the world

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Two words
    Brutally
    Honest.

    I wouldn't change a thing about it, because its the truth.

    Good Writing
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by Stumbling Shaman

    We get angry, saddened, we wonder why it has to be this way. We know that something is wrong yet we have know idea what to do about it. One person alone is not enough. We get together and try to figure it out and it is never enough to heal the pain. And in the end it is the most innocent among us that suffer the most.
    Keep on dreaming, Mona, as will I.
    Peace and Love.

  • 18 years ago

    by justeene

    So true well done i liked it cause it shows life

  • 18 years ago

    by tinkerbell

    Its good

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wonderful dear.... so damn unique... we desperately need more poems like this... love ur work...take care

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Good job! u said right that we really need to think abt these children. its nice to read such a topic . nice poem. take care
    bharti

  • 18 years ago

    by Lexie

    This was word just right. It's so truthful. Wonderful job, keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Paula

    Oh my so powerful. and i hope this opens up a few peoples eyes to what is really goin on in our 'perfect' world