Very nice... full of emotion, i can relate in way. It read well and your choice of words are good.
5/5

Thanks for your commeny, i really appreciate it.

xxx cici xxx

Pz dont we all care about you
this was so sad but i know how you feel i can help you if you want me to just e mail me at abradley89@hotmail.com im always here to talk and i will listen

andrea

Hey there.. great poem u have.. i loved your ending.. all your poems always i stir my my emotions.. stay strong alright.. there will be that angel one day who'd make u feel like u've never felt before, u'd give up the world for her.. until then you'll have to wait until she finds you.. Don't give up cuz i know ur a strong guy.. i'll always be there if u need someone to talk to or anything so keep writting your great poems.. i'll be waiting to read your next work.. much love.

I really liked this poem, because it was so well written, i love all your poems, keep writing
xx
love Tara xxx