Comments : Tempted and tried

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    How TRUE!!!!!!! I truly loved this one and ohhhhhh how it speaks the truth...A Masterpiece......excellent piece once again....I truly love your poems.....

    Love Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    The message you portrayed is so true.

    'When you think you may have found
    someone special and you know
    Hold on to them forever
    and never let them go"

    ^I love this part...from beginning to end, you did an outstanding job! enjoyed this write. keep up the good work.